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muslimaaaa 07-06-2008 03:39 PM
شعر من تأليفى (pray)
 
pray

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hidayamina 07-06-2008 03:51 PM
You are a very good poet
your poem is very nice
take care of your capacities
but there was a small mistake
could refer to the past not to the future
and tomorrow is the future
thanks a lot
-hidaya-

muslimaaaa 08-06-2008 02:24 AM
thank you sister hidayamina for your reply but i couldn't understand what you mean?? this poem is on the future i don't mean tomorrow tomorrow i mean by it the future as tomorrow :love0072:is used in the future thank you alot

White ♥ Heart 14-06-2008 11:16 AM
o h Allah !
it's imazing ... it tuched my heart Heart.. really .. I can't explain to you ..
thank yyou soooo much .. I hope we still in the Islam way ..

وردة السلام 14-06-2008 07:41 PM
شكرا على الشعر الحلو
,,سلام,,

وردة السلام 14-06-2008 07:50 PM
شكرا على الموضوع الحلو
,,سلا,,

muslimaaaa 19-06-2008 02:05 PM
:love0072: جزاكم الله كل الخير White ♥ Heart ,وردة السلام على الردود الحلوه والله اسعدنى ردودكم كثيرا" الله يسعدكم دنيا و اخره:kez_09:

وردة السلام 20-06-2008 01:56 AM
ممكن اختي تجيبي نسخة بالعربي
,,سلام,,

muslimaaaa 20-06-2008 04:31 AM
ممكن طبعا" يا وردة السلام :give_rose:

صلى و لا تقول غدا" سوف اصلى
و تذكر ان غدا" يمكن ان يكون يومك (اعنى الموت)
فما الذى ستقوله لله فى هذا اليوم
انت لست مخلوق للهو و من الله لايمكن تهرب
الى اين ستذهب و الله الذى خلقك يرى ما تفعل
هو اعطاك ما تحب و مع ذلك يمكنك الضحك عندما تفعل ما يكره
و هو ابدا" لا يكون بعيد
فالان ماذا ستقول
اخفض رأ سك الى الاسفل
و لا تنظر حولك
هذا العالم صغير جدا"
مثل حفره صغيره
فى لحظه يمكن ان تغلق و تجد نفسك فى عالم اخر

مغادرة بصمت 20-06-2008 02:04 PM
nice poem...

Thank you...


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